Night Storm
By: Topaz-Tribal
Rain
It drops from the sky without a care
Letting itself fall upon my window sill
Chills
I知 freezing, though I知 wrapped in blankets
I知 cold, though there is a warm body next to mine
Damp
It smells like a forest, wet with dew
But nothing overpowers the smell of tears
Taste
I can almost taste the fresh rain water
Salt track make their way to my lips
Feeling?
Shouldn稚 I be content?
Why am I empty inside?
Sounds
Distant claps of thunder prickle my ears
Deep, rhythmic breathing next to me
Why?
Am I suppose to be here?
Do I deserve this?
Rain
The water continues to pour from the sky
I never move from my place
©2004-2009 ~Topaz-Tribal
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Just a little poem I whipped up on a rainy night. ^_^ It's angsty. I love it.
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