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Last Lonely Stand
By:  Topaz-Tribal

Underneath the dark night sky
Within the foliage of the trees
There I tilt my head to cry

Never will I fully know why
My sobs are floating on the breeze
Underneath the dark night sky

All they did to me was lie
I feel my body begin to freeze
There I tilt my head to cry

I hear my enemies so nearby
Closing in like a disease
Underneath the dark night sky

Quite soon now I am going to die
Brokenly sunk down on my knees
There I tilt my head to cry

A tear drops down from my eye
Will no one ever hear my plea
Underneath the dark night sky
There I tilt my head to cry
©2004-2010 ~Topaz-Tribal
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Author's Comments

This was actually done as an assignment for my Creative Writing class (which only consisted of 3 people e_e). I liked it a lot even though I did if for a class. The poem basically depicts the few moments before death is inevitable. Enjoy.

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I like. This account is not a one-person thing, it's a club's one, but I don't think they'll mind that I favorited it... I tried writing a villinel (sp?) and it about killed me. But it was do-able...wow. I like this one.

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September 14, 2004
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